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Post by Takeda Shingen on Jan 25, 2012 20:43:05 GMT -5
SHINGEN TAKEDAWho the hell do you think I am? - The Tiger of Kai -
NAME: Takeda Shingen, The great demon leader of The Great Takeda Cavalry, The legendary Tiger of Kai whose roar can be heard in all Japan, The rider of the skies
AGE: Summoned in 20, died historically in 49
GENDER: Male
CLASS: RIDER
AFFILIATION: The great demon leader of The Great Takeda Cavalry, The legendary Tiger of Kai whose roar can be heard in all Japan, The rider of the skies
ALIGNMENT: Chaotic Good
ORIGIN: Freedom
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PERSONALITY: THE LEGENDARY TIGER OF KAI TAKEDA SHINGEN is a man of many words. All of them about himself and how great he is. But, he is a true friend that stick through thick and thin, words of encouragement are his forte, and the bond that he created through friendship is unbreakable. He fears nothing, not even the gods themselves, and he aspires true freedom for everybody.
He doesn't mind what other people does as long as it does not affect him and his friends.
He can be a bit cocky and an asshole at times, though. He will not run away, even when losing. He doesn't underestimate his opponents, but he does overestimate himself. He also can get bored easily and wander off on his own, and ignoring his Master's commands (unless you gained his trust) .
Though he can sometimes look as a busybody when it comes to his friends problems, he has his reasons on why he wants to help.
HISTORY:
"Takeda Shingen was at the age of 21 when I become the head of my clan, THE GREAT TAKEDA CLAN.
The first thing Shingen did was conquer the Shinano Province. A number of the major daimyos in the Shinano region marched on the border of Kai Province, hoping to neutralize the the great Shingen. Shingen laughed at their feeble attempts. They foolishly though Shingen was going to gather my forces down at Fuchu, so they were unprepared when Shingen's forces suddenly came down upon them at the battle of Sezawa. Taking advantage of their confusion, Shingen was able to score a quick victory, which set the stage for his drive into Shinano lands that same year. Some of the fools Shingen defeated fled the region, eventually coming to plead for help from the Province of Echigo.
After Shingen had conquered Shinano, Shingen faced the only opponent worthy of facing me, the Great Takeda Shingen. She was the mighty Uesegi Kenshin Who I hope will get RP'd too, nudge nudge wink wink PS: Make her a Saber PSS: She's a she, the Dragon of Eichigo. Shingen faced her on the battlefield five times at the battles of Kawanakajima. The fourth battle was the most viscous one, perhaps. She attacked me with her sword while Shingend defended with his iron war fan or tessen. Both lost many men in this fight, and Shingen in particular lost two of his my, Yamamoto Kansuke and my younger brother Takeda Nobushige. After Shingen mourned their deaths, Shingen had successfully kept the forces led by Uesugi Kenshin out of the northern boundaries of Shinano, taken over a strategically important castle in west, and suppressed internal objection to his plans to take advantage of the weakened Imagawa clan, he was ready to carry out my planned Suruga invasion.
During this time Shingen also ordered the damming project of the Fuji River.
Then he died. Suddenly. After he defeated both Nobunaga and Ieyasu, I died because of Pneumonia and an old war wound of mine.
Then the fifth Holy Grail War began.
So begins another chapter in the story of the Tiger of Kai.
EXTRA INFORMATION: He rides Date's Motorcycle Horse in Sengoku Basara (AKA a normal horse with bike handles and mufflers strapped on). No, really, he does. It's his main horse.
Also the awesome glasses is still present.
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OOC NAME: Rubu
OTHER CHARACTERS: nope
FACE CLAIM: TENGEN TOPPA GURREN LAGANN •Kamina
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Post by Takeda Shingen on Jan 25, 2012 20:50:08 GMT -5
TAKEDA SHINGEN Whether it's impossible or laughable, great men open up to the bath of battle! - Leader of The Takeda Cavalry -
STATUS INFORMATION:
[/b] A AGILITY: D MANA: C LUCK: D ENDURANCE:A[/ul] MASTER:[/size][/blockquote] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - SKILL LIST:
[/b] Riding: A: All creatures but those of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast-rank can be used as mounts. SKILL TWO: Magic Resistance: D: Cancel Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy. SKILL THREE: Bravery: A+:The ability to negate mental interference such as pressure, confusion and fascination. Bonus effect of increasing melee damage. SKILL FOUR: Charisma: A: Can be said to have achieved the greatest level of popularity as a human being. SKILL FIVE: Military Tactics: B: Tactical knowledge used not for one-on-one combat situations, but for battles where many are mobilized. Bonus modifiers are provided during use of one's own Anti-Army Noble Phantasm or when dealing against an enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm. [/ul][/size][/blockquote] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - NOBLE PHANTASM:
[/b] The legendary Takeda Cavalry, which was revered and feared all throught Japan, was one of the greatest despite Japanese terrain was unsuitable for cavalry, thanks to the quality of the horses and the soldier, and Shingen's tactics. The effect of this Phantasm is simple. A simple straightforward charge consisting of a hundred cavalry soldiers, mowing everything in their path. Takeda himself is on the front of the charge. He cannot change their course and/or stop the charge once it's began, though. The soldiers are not on Servant level, and can be easily killed by Servants. Human level stats: A+ Strength, B agility and strength, E/F mana (They don't actually have circuits, magic etc etc since they're just summons), E luck. RANK: A+ TYPE: Anti-army Noble Phantasm RANGE: 1 ~ 100 MAX. TARGETS: 100[/ul] [/b] The great stables of Kai, Shingen's homeland. The horses was basically the greatest of all Japan, and even one was worth many gold. This is where he stores his crimson steed Gurren and the other 24 horses his generals rides. Thanks to this Phantasm, he can summon any of the 25 horses whenever he wants. Horses are just that. Horses, just faster than normal horses, since they're phantasmal and all. They can probably outrun a modern car. RANK: C TYPE: Support RANGE: -- MAX. TARGETS: 25[/ul] [/b] The 24 generals of Takeda. These Twenty-Four were the most trusted commanders of the armies of Takeda Shingen. Their bonds of Friendship was so unbreakable the offered their service even in this second life. This NP is simple. Shingen summons the 24 generals. Without horses, though. He would have to use his other NP for that. They're a bit stronger that the Kawanakajima Soldiers. E servant level stats for their Strength and Endurance only. RANK: A TYPE: Support RANGE: -- MAX. TARGETS: 24[/ul] [/size][/blockquote][/blockquote]
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Post by KARIYA on Jan 27, 2012 0:36:48 GMT -5
Still pretty new at grading profiles so bear with me, heh... Personality: Seems good, but develop it a bit more. I know you can do a bit better. Just one more paragraph is all I ask. Also give examples and such. Any quirks he possesses? History: Looks alright, I guess. Extra Information: Wait, so his horse is a... motorcycle...? I don't think that's gonna work... Because Iskander could've gone as a truck in Zero with Gordias Wheel... *shot* Yeah... sorry... Stats: Acceptable. Skills: Good Noble Phantasms: - KAWANAKAJIMA: A Reality Marble like Iskander? If so, how strong are these men each? I'm feeling sort of iffy allowing this... In fact if you make them below servant level, I'm sure it'll pass...
- Stables of Kai: Explain what these 24 horses can do and also... Can you summon them all together or what...?
- 24 Generals of Takeda: Uh... huh... So basically you're summoning 24 men as back up. Each of them likely to have Servant level strength... Hmm... = =;; Again, I'm iffy. You'd probably establish them higher than the men from Kawanakajima, but almost Servant level at least...
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Post by KARIYA on Jan 27, 2012 1:30:57 GMT -5
Alright everything else seems very much better. Now to work on your NP's.
Kawanakajima: You need to further explain how strong these men are individually.
Stables of Kai: How much faster than horses?
24 Generals: Looks good.
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Post by KARIYA on Jan 27, 2012 1:49:40 GMT -5
Made good changes I believe. I'll leave the rest to Lancelot to see if I missed anything... Seeing that I'm still a novice grader.
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Post by LANCELOT on Jan 31, 2012 13:37:00 GMT -5
History, third person. I admire the way you typed it but it needs to be third person, always. If it does not say that in the rules then I am going to make it in there
Stats: I can accept though your really hurting yourself on agility. Best of luck you tank.
Noble Phantasms: I actually like these, I can approve
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Post by KARIYA on Feb 3, 2012 22:28:31 GMT -5
And with this done. Approved.
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